Thursday, April 7, 2011

Honey..... I love you.

This is what we were given to use for our story:
Who: Babs Watson
What: a fur coat, phone call, jealousy, push
Where: a taxi
First line: Babs threw her bag on the floor and burst into tears.

                                                                                        Babs Watson

 Babs threw her bag  on the floor and burst into tears. Pulled her coat tighter trying to cover her half naked body from having to push passed the people to jump into the taxi. She was embarrassed, humiliated and almost unable to speak.

“I’ll never be able to show my face again, and now the love of my life will never want to see me or even be associated with me.” Babs cried out, as she used her fur coat to wipe her nose.

Beep, Beep, Beep, Beep, Beep, Beep. “Hey lady, your cell phone!” Yelled the impatient taxi driver.

She didn't want to answer it, because she knew who it was, but she also knew that he would just keep calling her if she didn’t pick it up. Babs slowly grabbed the bag off the floor and pulled out her cell phone. Taking a deep breath trying to gain some sort of composure, she closed her eyes and slowly let out the air as if she were standing before a firing squad. “Hello” she said in a soft whimper.

“Babs, honey, are you ok? Come on back, please, they’re all gone. We need to talk.” He said.

A million thoughts raced through her head. “Why would he want her to come back? Had she not embarrassed him enough?” Her mouth was unable to form a reply.

The voice on the other end of the line continued, “Look honey, I’m so sorry, I know this was awful for you, I saw how mortified you looked when I walked in with the guys from my office. If I had thought for a moment that you had this surprise waiting for me, I would not have brought the guys home. You told me you were going out with the girls. Come on honey, come home. Please! And if it helps at all, the guys are green with jealousy that I have such a hot wife who would be waiting at home for me looking like that. Honey….. I love you.”

Hope you enjoyed my little tea time story. Love to all of you. Margie


  1. Good suspense and LOL. Every husband's hope and wish -- you little Hott Tamale! Thanks for joining with us. Link your post back and read other entries.

  2. You vixen, you!!

    This made my afternoon here at the office; I needed a silly grin, big time!


  3. I love what you did with the prompts! You took me to an entirely different ending than I expected when I began reading. You set that scene perfectly. Thank you for sharing it :)

    I want to read more!

  4. You all make me feel so good about myself. Being a SAHM I need a good boost now and then. Thanks to all three of you!!!!!!!!!!!

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  6. That was great! It took the prompts in a totally different direction than I expected. Loved the line "...used her fur coat to wipe her nose." he he.

  7. Oops! *you* took the prompts...

  8. Margory: just letting you know there was another story link yesterday. Have a great weekend!